2009年12月28日 星期一
Reflection
I can confidently say that I am concentrated on this blog project and I do seriously complete tasks on every week. Although my writing is not interesting enough, I do think hard on every topic. Also, I try to apply the rules of writing that I learn in the composition class. When I finish my writing, I always check whether the topic sentence is in the paragraph. I try to make the answers of questions into a complete paragraph and not just post the questions and answers on my blog. I attempt to give my writing a different subject rather than using the number of week. Because I manage my blog attentively, the grade I would like to give to myself is 90. I think that I deserve this score due to the effort I have made that mention above. The score I would like to give to my partner is 92. Both of us are doing well on this blog project, but I think my partner’s writing is more profound. I always get some new thoughts after reading her reply. Therefore, I think that she deserves this score.
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I think that both my partner and I have paid lots of efforts toward this writing activity. To these topics, I tried to think profoundly. Also, I tried to relate my writing with my partner’s writing. In these writings, I write my thoughts freely. I first think what I am going to write, and then make my thoughts into several paragraphs. Finally, I start writing.
回覆刪除However, because junior year is such a busy year, and many kinds of reports come to us every week. Moreover, there are some “big” reports just like SOAP, presentations, and so on. As a consequence, sometimes I am easily to delay my writing tasks. Then, I posted more than one writings at the same time sometimes. This is the reason I feel a little sorry to my partner. She always posted her writings on time. Also, sometimes, she gave some feedback toward my writings.
Since we both put lots of efforts toward this writing activity, I would give myself 91. Although sometimes I delay my writing, I try my best to reply every task and think profoundly. What’s more, I tried to make my writing longer on each topic assigned. Because of these efforts I put, I think I deserve this score.
As for my partner, the score I would give her is 93. The reason why I give her 93 is that she did post her writings on time. Also, her writings are all related to the topics and questions given. As a consequence, I think that she did pay lots of efforts toward this activity. Also, she deserves this score.
Thanks for your affirmative. Both of us are doing well on this writing activity.
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